Talk:Filipino nationalism/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: What a pro. (talk · contribs) 15:04, 14 April 2012 (UTC) Sorry, but this article needs a lot of work before it becomes a GA. Good luck on improving the article, though. What a pro (talk, contribs) thinks that ohhhh, ohhh, woaaah-oh-oh-ohhhhh. 15:04, 14 April 2012 (UTC)
 * The lead is too small for an article of this size.
 * I don't see how sections 7, 8, and 11 relate to Filipino Nationalism.
 * There are several citation needed tags and a clarification needed tag.
 * Some sections have whole paragraphs that are uncited.
 * Dashes and capitalization aren't used properly (e.g. The Start of Filipino Nationalism (1760s-1820s)).
 * There is a reference an entire book (citation 1) without giving the pages.
 * There are two references that are exactly the same (11 & 12).
 * There are some bare URLs.
 * Reference 30 leads to nowhere.
 * Many references lack details like publisher, accessdate, etc.
 * Some grammar errors (e.g. Ramon Magsaysay, which was then...).
 * A little POV (e.g. Corazon Aquino succeeded as president of the Philippines.).
 * Prose needs work (e.g. The Katipunan reached an overwhelming membership and attracted almost the lowly of the Filipino class.)