Talk:Filmed Before a Live Studio Audience/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Short description: All mainspace articles should have a short description.
 * Non-free use rationale for the poster looks good.
 * Plot section is less than 400 words so it passes MOS:TVPLOT.
 * Are the commas after "with his speed", "Vision for dinner", and "as a test" necessary?
 * "Maximoff tells Vision to remove the food from Mr. Hart's throat" – elaborate
 * Add hyphens between "21st century", "most watched", "most streamed", and "most viewed".
 * "only eight script revisions ." "only eight script revisions."
 * "Dennis the mailman" sounds better than "the mailman Dennis" in #Casting.
 * Does "clean-up" usually have a hyphen between it?
 * "aspect ration" – typo?
 * "Nielsen Media Research, who measure" "Nielsen Media Research, which measures" (company)
 * "had 9.3 percent share" "had a 9.3 percent share"
 * Avengers: Age of Ultron is linked twice.
 * Citation #6 from The Hollywood Reporter is marked as dead but the link works.
 * Citation #51 is missing an author credit ("Seymour, Mike").
 * Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 01:59, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
 * I think myself and have addressed these. As stated on your episode 2 review, the short description is handled automatically by the infobox. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 03:11, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you and ! - adamstom97 (talk) 04:20, 2 September 2021 (UTC)