Talk:Final Fantasy VII G-Bike/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Abryn (talk · contribs) 16:36, 5 June 2020 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Development
 * 'Titles' > 'Title's'

Reception
 * Game critics is a bit redundant since every critic cited is a game critic.
 * Kyle Hilliard's first comment is how fans would react to this, so "further" feels like it doesn't quite make sense.
 * May be good to change the quotation of "uh, what?" to say instead that people reacted with confusion.
 * Given that the other sources say "person of website" it may be worthwhile to say "AppGet staff" for consistency.

Sources


 * Can you attach a source verifying that the game takes place in Midgar?
 * Can you attach a source verifying Tifa's role?

Images


 * Fair use rationales should have explanations for why it's not replaceable with free media or how it respects commercial opportunities.
 * Not necessary for GA, but consider alt text to describe the images.


 * Ok, I did the copy editing as requested, good fixes. I changed the “titles” I think you were referring to, and I placed the reference that describes how the game takes place in Midgar in the sentence next to it. This Japanese source https://game.watch.impress.co.jp/docs/news/667842.html discusses her appearance where she helps Cloud in the game, though she is not a playable character. I also improved the fair use rationale as you asked. So that should do it for GA status unless there is something else or I missed something! By the way, what is alt text? Judgesurreal777 (talk) 18:53, 5 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Alt text is just, you add |alt= followed by text describing what the image shows. - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 19:11, 5 June 2020 (UTC)