Talk:Final Five (gymnastics)/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 22:11, 29 May 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 07:52, 19 June 2024 (UTC)

I will be reviewing this, comments will probably be finished in the next 72 hours! Arconning (talk) 07:52, 19 June 2024 (UTC)


 * @Riley1012 Here are my comments! Arconning (talk) 15:13, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the review, I think I have addressed all of your comments! -Riley1012 (talk) 18:18, 20 June 2024 (UTC)

Prose and MoS

 * Probably put a disambig on the top of the page, considering there are other types of Final Fives.

Lead

 * It was the United States', wikilink United States to United States at the Summer Olympics.


 * second at an Olympics hosted outside the United States., mention in body too + source or just omit. Suggesting to omit


 * With nine medals total, the Final Five is the most decorated American Olympic gymnastics team., As of [YEAR],....

Team background

 * dubbed the Fierce Five, at the 2012 London Olympics, add comma at the end.


 * With 10 gold medals total,, spell out as ten. MOS:NUMERAL


 * becoming the first American women, woman as it's referring to Biles.


 * alongside Douglas and Raisman, 2016 U.S. Classic, add comma at the end.


 * Then at the National Championships, Then, at the National Championships.


 * fourth-straight, remove hyphen.

Olympic Trials

 * for the Olympic team with, add comma after team.

Captain and nickname

 * age 22, suggest saying it as 22 years old.


 * The team members chose the name Final Five before the Olympic Games,, I'm guessing the italicization is for emphasis? Use the templates provided in Manual of Style/Text formatting, rather than apostrophes.
 * ✅ switched to quotation marks, although those can be removed if needed.


 * made up of four athletes, add comma at the end.

2016 Summer Olympics

 * Instances of on uneven bars and on the uneven bars and other apparatus, would suggest to stick with the latter to maintain consistency.
 * ✅ All instances should be fixed now


 * over points ahead of Raisman, list how many points.


 * who won the silver medal, add comma at the end.


 * bronze-medalist Aliya Mustafina, Mustafina of...[Nation]..


 * World all-around champion, uncapitalize world.


 * and Ecaterina Szabo (1984), add comma at the end.


 * Overall, the Final Five won nine Olympic medals, making them the most decorated American gymnastics team in history, As of....

Post-Olympics

 * Hernandez returned to completion in 2021, guessing it should be competition.


 * postponed-2020 Olympic Games, remove hyphen.


 * plus one of the three alternates, who?
 * Locklear, information added. ✅

Gallery

 * I suggest removing, since they're featured in the first image shown. But per Image use policy, a bit iffy. Though I heavily suggest removing it since they would be mentioned in the first image.

Images

 * Images have proper licenses.
 * List down members of the "Final Five" in the image caption seen in the lead. Clarify the members from left-to-right, per the tag.


 * The Final Five celebrating after winning the Women's Team All-Around at the 2016 Summer Olympics, caption on second image. Uncapitalize Women's Team All-Around.

Refs

 * Earwig pass.
 * Manual pass.

Spotchecks

 * Ref 36, seems good.
 * Ref 49, seems good.
 * Honestly, all of the sources seem pretty nice, standard sources someone would use in a sports article, pass. :)

Misc

 * No ongoing edit war, pretty broad information on the topic, neutral.