Talk:Final Symphony II/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Judgesurreal777 (talk · contribs) 02:20, 12 December 2016 (UTC)

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I believe IOU a review, so here is one incoming! I'll be filling it out in the next little bit. Judgesurreal777 (talk) 02:20, 12 December 2016 (UTC)

A fantastic read! Let's give it seven days, let me know if you need more time or have questions about my feedback. Great job ! Judgesurreal777 (talk) 03:46, 12 December 2016 (UTC)
 * 1a) Changed the one sentence, and clarified a few points that indicated June was the end- that's just the latest concert, and no more have been announced, but they almost certainly will announce some more in a few months for 2017 so it's not "over".
 * 1b) Eh, the first paragraph is 7 sentences, so chopping it up would leave it a bit awkward
 * 2b) JPGames.de: interview, large, active site (dozens of articles a day, numerous interviews), has an editorial team; Cubed3: has an editorial staff, incorporated, numerous interviews; Cubed Gamers: online site of an actual magazine (multiple issues produced), has an editor; Side One: interview, linked from the official Merregnon site here; XOTV: interview, recently defunct online magazine run by Baronet Entertainment as one of their multiple properties
 * 3a) Sample added, good idea
 * 5) Frankly, if the other Merregnon Studios concert articles are any guide, I'll be lucky if there's any editing by anyone else at all!
 * Alright, all sorted! -- Pres N  04:11, 13 December 2016 (UTC)
 * , agreed, all sorted, so GA! Keep up the good work :) Judgesurreal777 (talk) 11:50, 13 December 2016 (UTC)