Talk:Findhorn Ecovillage

Opening Paragaph
I am not happy with the passage that reads "...especially regarding the spiritual origins of the community..."

It is not clear if this is being cited in the footnotes and it is not picked up on later in the main body. If it is important enough for an introduction it must be worth expanding upon? --Lord Matt (talk) 17:40, 4 June 2008 (UTC)


 * This is expanded on under Awards, UN Connections and Critiques: "Various critiques exist in print[34][35] although these tend to concentrate on the eclectic spirituality...." Ben MacDuiTalk /  Walk  07:50, 5 June 2008 (UTC)


 * I removed the sentence "...especially regarding the spiritual origins of the community..."

because it is not supported by the sources at the end of the paragraph and seems to be a little bit on the POV side. Elmmapleoakpine (talk) 00:47, 18 September 2009 (UTC)


 * Nothing about Findhorn's spiritual dimension, then? Kortoso (talk) 17:10, 25 September 2013 (UTC)