Talk:Fine Time Fontayne

Opening sentence doesn't make sense
"... English character actor and stage director, including a successful production of Sleeping Beauty at the Mercury Theatre, Colchester, Essex, UK".

This doesn't make sense.

Subjective / self-promotion
"He has frequently appeared in pantomime at the Belgrade Theatre, Coventry, dominating the stage with his magnificent presence and his splendid voice."

Dominiting... Magnificent... Splendid: this sounds like an effusive, subjective review (or a joke) and certainly isn't factual but rather, at best, a questionable and debatable opinion. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.176.214.202 (talk) 21:32, 6 October 2012 (UTC)