Talk:Fire adaptations

Peer Review
Themap55 (talk) 05:50, 28 November 2017 (UTC)
 * I think you have a lot of good material so far, but I feel that you could add a little more detail in the intro paragraph in maybe a sentence or two and also stretching some sentences out potentially.
 * I think that if you change all of the places that say "the fire" to "a fire" the page will read smoother. Also because you aren't referring to a specific fire.
 * I think that you have a good amount of writing for each sub section and you don't go too far into detail about each.
 * If you keep the animal adaptations succinct like the plant adaptations, and not focus too much on one species, your page should look pretty nice and clean and be easy to navigate.