Talk:Fiumefreddo di Sicilia

This article is seen like an essay
I wrote this article about my home town, if there are some parts that aren't ok tell me them that i will fix or explain why i wrote it in that way. Hoping that someone answers.... ArmyDuck 22:33, 15 September 2006 (UTC)
 * You might want to have a big read of Citing sources, Verifiability and Reliable sources - as that latter page says "Articles should be based on reliable, third-party, published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy". Technically anything that isn't referenced from a book or something can be removed from Wikipedia. Now that's not going to happen here, but the single thing you could do to improve the article would be to provide references for everything you've written. FlagSteward (talk) 19:54, 12 May 2008 (UTC)

How to fix this article
Ciao ArmyDuck, perhaps if you could put some paragraphs and links into the article, rather than just big slabs of writing it will be easier to read and look more like a Wikipedia article rather than an essay.