Talk:Five Finger Death Punch/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: SMasters (talk) 08:08, 1 March 2011 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * There are some minor issues with the prose:
 * 1) There is a spacing problem with a comma in this line"They have released six top ten singles: "The Bleeding", "Never Enough", "Hard to See", "Walk Away" ,"Bad Company" and "Far from Home"." It causes the comma to start a sentence on my screen.
 * 2) Every single sentence in the third paragraph starts with "They", and two out of three sentences in the 2nd para starts with "They".
 * 3) Full dates including the year, should have a comma after the year. E.g. "...September 2, 2007[,] the band..."
 * 4) This is not consistent with the rest: "October 3rd through November 4, 2010". I suggest you delete the "rd" and use a dash.


 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * The picture of Jason Hook causes the War Is the Answer heading to indent. Move the picture higher of make it smaller.
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Not bad overall, just a few minor issues to be fixed and we should be there. – SMasters (talk) 08:35, 1 March 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, everything seems to have been fixed and I'm now happy to promoted it. – SMasters (talk) 11:48, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Not bad overall, just a few minor issues to be fixed and we should be there. – SMasters (talk) 08:35, 1 March 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, everything seems to have been fixed and I'm now happy to promoted it. – SMasters (talk) 11:48, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Not bad overall, just a few minor issues to be fixed and we should be there. – SMasters (talk) 08:35, 1 March 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, everything seems to have been fixed and I'm now happy to promoted it. – SMasters (talk) 11:48, 3 March 2011 (UTC)