Talk:Fjäriln vingad syns på Haga/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:24, 9 February 2022 (UTC)

You seem to have a lot of nominees up for review... --K. Peake 07:24, 9 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Very few now, January was crazy. Thanks as always for taking this on. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:07, 9 February 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * Thanks!


 * The most popular part should be after the lyrical description part
 * Moved.


 * Merge both paras since they are too short to standalone
 * Done.


 * Wikilink Gustav III to itself
 * Done.


 * "know Fjäril'n vingad by heart; it has been recorded many times" → "know the composition by heart; it has been recorded numerous times"
 * Rearranged.

Context

 * Good

Music and verse form

 * Add relevant text to the audio sample
 * Added.


 * Pipe rhythming pattern to Rhyme scheme
 * Done.

Lyrics

 * Add a comma after Adolf Ulrik Kirstein
 * Done.
 * "describes it as a" → "describes the composition as a
 * Done.
 * Where are the writing years sourced by [11]?
 * Used Massengale instead, as Bellman.net usually does.
 * Merge the last para with the above one per overly short size
 * Done.
 * Wikilink Gustav III to itself, doing the same on img text
 * Done.

Reception

 * Video looks good!
 * Noted.


 * Retitle to Reception and legacy
 * Done.


 * Pipe Solna to Solna Municipality
 * Done.
 * "in 2005 it was" → "in 2005, the composition was"
 * Done.

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 09:00, 9 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Many thanks, that seems to be everything. Chiswick Chap (talk) 10:15, 9 February 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ time, very satisfied with your speed once again and I briefly copyedited the lead! --K. Peake 21:40, 9 February 2022 (UTC)