Talk:Flagstaff, Arizona/to do


 * copy-edit; remove any "flowery" language, weasel-words.
 * add a few more details to demographics section (more than just the standard bot-generated info from the census. most of this is done, still needs a little work.
 * add some description of various neighborhoods to the cityscape section; probably remove road descriptions from this section, as it's already generally under the transportation section.
 * fix this: "The opening paragraph in the lead states that the city's name comes from the flagpole made by the Boston Party in 1876, but then the first paragraph in the history section seems to imply that that event occurred earlier on the Beale Expedition. This could use some clarification." (from FAC review)
 * Need more details (with citations) on the early history of the town, particularly the lumber/timber industry and the Riordan family.
 * Add info about NAU lumberjack sports to the sports section; maybe some high school sports, though this is less important/notable.
 * Need citations for: first paragraph of climate section; "Flagstaff has garnered a reputation as a magnet for ...".
 * remove unnecessary parentheses.
 * remove unnecessary bolded words.
 * expand short (two-sentence or so) paragraphs.
 * add some general topography info to the geography section.
 * add info on crime to the demographics section.
 * add info on politics to the government section.
 * add info on the city's library system to the education section.
 * move transportation to infrastructure section.
 * Photos for: geography, sports, education sections.
 * expand (those not mentioned above):
 * climate
 * economy?
 * parks and rec
 * education
 * infrastructure
 * notable people
 * resolve move discussion about media and popular culture