Talk:Flame-faced tanager/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:56, 1 October 2021 (UTC)

Comments
 * Link arthropods.
 * Done.


 * Link fledgling.
 * Done.


 * "by the IUCN. However" explain IUCN before using the initialism.
 * Done.


 * "genus Tangara. Within" that's a dab page.
 * Fixed.


 * "and golden tanager. This" overlinked.
 * Should have been golden-eared, fixed.


 * "tanager.[7] All three subspecies are recognized" -> "tanager,[7] all of which are recognized"
 * Done.


 * "Zimmer, 1943:" why not in parentheses like the others.
 * The parentheses are actually a way to show that a species or subspecies was described by the author in a different name than the one currently assigned i.e. the genus was different when the author described it.


 * "weighing 28 g (0.99 oz)." average?
 * That it is an average is mentioned earlier in the sentence: I've reworded it so that it is maybe slightly clearer.


 * "have 7 other species' seven.
 * Done.


 * A couple of [clarification needed] tags in there.
 * Gleaning was already linked, and I've added an explanation. The second tag is after a subspecies name which has already been mentioned, so maybe you could remove it if you think it's clear enough.


 * Date formats in the references should be consistent, either DD MM YYYY or YYYY-MM-DD, but not a mixture.
 * Fixed, all refs are now YYYY-MM-DD

That's all I have for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:42, 4 October 2021 (UTC)