Talk:Flammulated flycatcher/GA1

GA Review
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Very good read. I believe it meets the Good article criteria and can be listed. Good prose, well-cited, neutral. I think it meets the completeness criterion as well. The editor seems to overuse the word 'this' a bit near the end (e.g. 'this species') over and over, so maybe some of this could be rephrased a bit. Although I don't think that's a reason to deny GA status at this time.

Good work! Dr. Cash (talk) 01:52, 30 May 2008 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the review. I'll work on the "this"es near the end of the article. Rufous-crowned Sparrow (talk) 02:00, 30 May 2008 (UTC)