Talk:Flat Top Manor/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 21:37, 16 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Mention in the lead the NPS management


 * Recommend adding a couple sentences to the history about Cone's history as a textile entreprenuer


 * "There was a five acre lawn" - use the convert template to also produce a value in ha for this


 * "It then passed to the Cone Memorial Hospital in Greensboro" - link that to Moses H. Cone Memorial Hospital


 * Do we know how many rooms, stories, or square footage the house had?
 * ✅ In the history section section I wrote, It has twenty-three rooms and 13,000 square feet (1,200 m2) of living space. In the Legacy section I wrote,  There are tours given by Park Rangers of the second story of the mansion. I have been there several times and only recall those two levels. Will what I wrote in the article work?--Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:10, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Yes. I apparently missed it the first time around. Hog Farm Talk 22:42, 19 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Mention that it's a contributing property on the NRHP listing for the Flat Top Estate (NRHP name for the Memorial Park)


 * this NRHP nomination form PDF probably has some information that can be added


 * Make sure all of the web sources have publishers - one of the newspaper refs doesn't and a couple others are just the title (check for authors/dates on those too)


 * Overall, looks pretty good. Placing on hold. Hog Farm Talk 00:06, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
 * All issues have been addressed. Can y'all take another look. Thanks.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 18:56, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Ready to pass. I ran a copyvio check and was concerned, but after checking the dates, determined that The Watauga Democrat copied a substantial portion of this article for their reporting.  So all good from that angle. Hog Farm Talk 22:48, 19 July 2021 (UTC)