Talk:Flaws and All/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: — Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 04:25, 13 March 2011 (UTC)

Be prepared. — Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 04:25, 13 March 2011 (UTC)


 * recorded by American R&B singer Beyoncé Knowles for her second studio album re-released, B'Day Deluxe Edition --> recorded by American R&B singer Beyoncé Knowles for the re-release of her second studio album, B'Day Deluxe Edition. ✅
 * wikilink B'day
 * "Flaws and All" is similar to earlier records by Knowles, most of which compared it to that of Dangerously in Love --> doesnt make sense
 * wikilink classic and ballad
 * in which he sees through all of her flaws and loves her unconditionally --> who sees through all of her flaws and loves her unconditionally
 * Knowles for the B'Day Anthology Video Album ---> Knowles for the B'Day Anthology Video Album  ✅
 * italicize other instances of "B'Day", this is poor work.
 * the LEAD doesnot summarize the article.
 * Knowles discussed the concept for the video --> Knowles explained that the concept for the video ✅
 * please stop using apostrophed words like "doesn't" etc. -Not a problem here....? Theuhohreo (talk) 14:21, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
 * sees songwriting duties by --> songwriting duties? -Nothing wrong with that. Theuhohreo (talk) 14:21, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Taylor.Knowles and Taylor --> space ✅
 * Although the song was originally released during the re-release deluxe edition of B'Day, the song was included on many other releases. --> huh? ✅-Try re-reading, cause that was fine. Theuhohreo (talk) 14:21, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
 * "Flaws and All" garnered very positive reviews by critics, most of which complemented the ballad as a highlight of the album --> WP:OR, you cant generalize likie this✅
 * 'Flaws and All,' --> wrong, it should be 'Flaws and All',✅

OK enough, this article is just bad, bad, atrociously written. Please get a good copy-editor and then re-submit. Failing this. — Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 04:58, 13 March 2011 (UTC)