Talk:Flight Deck (California's Great America)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 03:30, 23 March 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

(Criteria marked are unassessed)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
 * Almost!
 * b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a. (reference section):
 * b. (citations to reliable sources):
 * There is one SELFPUB tweet and the POV video, but they seem acceptable for the claims used.
 * c. (OR):
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * Two CC images and the NFUR-bearing logo.
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * There's even alt text.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * Not much to do. Fresh eyes could find more things to do. 7-day hold. Sammi Brie  (she/her • t • c) 03:30, 23 March 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * Two CC images and the NFUR-bearing logo.
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * There's even alt text.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * Not much to do. Fresh eyes could find more things to do. 7-day hold. Sammi Brie  (she/her • t • c) 03:30, 23 March 2023 (UTC)
 * Two CC images and the NFUR-bearing logo.
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * There's even alt text.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * Not much to do. Fresh eyes could find more things to do. 7-day hold. Sammi Brie  (she/her • t • c) 03:30, 23 March 2023 (UTC)
 * Pass/fail:
 * Not much to do. Fresh eyes could find more things to do. 7-day hold. Sammi Brie  (she/her • t • c) 03:30, 23 March 2023 (UTC)
 * Not much to do. Fresh eyes could find more things to do. 7-day hold. Sammi Brie  (she/her • t • c) 03:30, 23 March 2023 (UTC)

Copy changes

 * The train departs making small right turn Missing an "a"
 * nearby steel roller coaster, Vortex no need for this comma. Because there's no article, you can't remove the appositive and have a flowing sentence.


 * ✅ Adog  ( Talk ・ Cont ) 13:01, 24 March 2023 (UTC)

Spot checks

 * 2: NYT: Mentions Top Gun and The Addams Family. (NYT ref #1 mentions Star Trek)
 * 9: Press Democrat: 100-foot lift hill, "impending military confrontation", aircraft carrier theming of the queue
 * 11: POV video, which is kind of like citing the roller coaster, but fine.
 * 23: Some of the injuries from the 2015 incident
 * 24: Temporary closure of the ride after the incident

No issues in the sources checked.


 * Thank you again for the review ! I have fixed the above. Let me know if there is anything else on the horizon. Apologies for the delay. :) Adog  ( Talk ・ Cont ) 13:01, 24 March 2023 (UTC)