Talk:Florence Fuller/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 19:58, 7 November 2013 (UTC)

Will take a look and jot notes here: Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 19:58, 7 November 2013 (UTC)


 * No information about background in RSA? i.e what did her father do?
 * Not that I have found. I did come across some information about an uncle in Cape Town, which isn't in the article, but not about the father. I found a funeral notice for him, but it didn't say anything about him either. hamiltonstone (talk) 23:24, 7 November 2013 (UTC)
 * ok then - you looked and if we have no sources, we have no sources...Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 23:35, 7 November 2013 (UTC)


 *  The family migrated to Australia in 1883 where Florence worked as a governess, while undertaking studies in art. - see I'd put the comma after the "where" not the "while"....?
 * So would I :-) hamiltonstone (talk) 00:17, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Done. hamiltonstone (talk) 02:01, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Any more we can add about any paintings and critique of them would help the article focus on her work a bit more...if any can be found.
 * Have found one more fleeting comment that i will try and add today. hamiltonstone (talk) 00:17, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Done. hamiltonstone (talk) 02:01, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Any more on her theosophical beleifs and how they may have influenced her painting would help alot.
 * I have one more quote from her, that i haven't worked out how to integrate into the text. Will think some more.hamiltonstone (talk) 00:17, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
 * I have added the quote, but it only indirectly goes to her beliefs. hamiltonstone (talk) 10:52, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Link the Observer newspaper..?
 * Was trying to avoid links in quotes, with the exception of the ones to the Hacketts, because it was so obviously the right place to do it...hamiltonstone (talk) 00:17, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
 * But linked it anyway. Hopefully no-one will mind. hamiltonstone (talk) 10:52, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Damn - was at Rookwood last week - be good to find her gravestone and take a snap. Might do so next wednesday when I drive past it...hmmm.
 * That would be interesting to see whether there is a gravestone. Rookwood is a fantastic place to visit. If you go, it is: Area :IN Section :J Grave number 207. hamiltonstone (talk) 00:17, 8 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Very little is turning up on UNSW library search - looks like you've done a good job scouring sources.....Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:32, 8 November 2013 (UTC)

1. Well written?:
 * Prose quality:
 * Manual of Style compliance:

2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:
 * References to sources:
 * Citations to reliable sources, where required:
 * No original research:

3. Broad in coverage?:
 * Major aspects:
 * Focused:

4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:
 * Fair representation without bias:

5. Reasonably stable?
 * No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA):

6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:
 * Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: - great, sorry I couldn't be more critical but has come together well. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:34, 8 November 2013 (UTC)