Talk:Florence McConney

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Remove the following: Florence McConney (20 September 1894 - ?) was a Canadian physician.

Replace with the following: Florence Spaulding Hardy McConney (20 September 1894 – 23 June, 1981) was a Canadian physician. She was the Chief of Medicine at Women's College Hospital from 1935-1950, as well as the first director of the hospital’s Cancer Detection Clinic from 1948-1958.


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Early life and education

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Change this sentence: She attended Jarvis Collegiate until she could attend the University of Toronto, graduating in arts in 1917, the same year she married.

To the following: She attended Jarvis Collegiate until she could attend the University of Toronto, graduating with a BA in 1917, the same year she married.


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Career

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Remove this sentence: McConney began work with the Women's College Hospital following her internship at St. Michael's Hospital in Toronto.

Replace with the following: McConney began work with Women's College Hospital in 1922 following her internship at St. Michael's Hospital in Toronto. McConney became the hospital’s Chief of Medicine in 1935.

Remove this sentence: Following her retirement from the College Hospital she became the director of the Cancer Detection Clinic.

Replace with the following: Following her retirement from the hospital she became the director of the Cancer Detection Clinic from 1948-1958. This clinic was opened in order to provide cancer screening to healthy women. In addition to being the first director of the clinic, McConney was the founder of the clinic and is cited with “pioneering the clinic and its mission”.


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