Talk:Florentino Torres High School

Guild of Copy Editors cleanup
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You can also (slowly and carefully) make changes to the article based upon a suggestion while I am still copy editing (approximately 2-3 days to complete).

Lead section

 * The lead section says "Tondo"; the Infobox says "Gagalangin Tondo". I like the Infobox.

Infobox

 * The graphics in the Infobox are beautiful


 * I would probably write the address as follows:


 * Juan Luna Street
 * Gagalangin Tondo, Manila
 * Philippines


 * [Note: Use the html tag  to force a new line]


 * linking


 * Tondo -to- Tondo, Manila
 * Manila -to- Manila
 * Philippines -to- Philippines


 * Reasons:


 * It's consistent with the lead section;
 * Is "Manila" three times in the address really necessary?


 * While researching the school's geocoordinate data, I visited the school's Facebook page. Please note that the pin on the map is in the wrong location.


 * The code in the "colors" parameter could be simplfied, as recommended in the documentation for the "Infobox school" template, by writing:


 * colors     = Gold and Maroon


 * At the bottom of the Infobox, the image "Florentino_Torres_High_School.png" tricked me. I thought it was a link to the school's website.


 * I found a website here: http://fths.smartschools.ph/. However, it hasn't been updated for a long time.


 * If you want the image to link to the school's website, use the "link=" parameter on the "[File:" statement. (See Extended image syntax)


 * In short, if your school has a current website, it's a good idea to specify the website's address in the Infobox.

--LukasMatt (talk) 16:37, 7 May 2014 (UTC)

History
"Legarda High School"
 * Should it also appear in the Infobox's list of former names?
 * [Note: Use the html tag  to force a new line]

"who were refused admission by the three existing public high schools"
 * Why were they refused admission?

"moved to the Sequoia Building at the foot of Pritil Bridge"
 * Where was it originally located when it first opened in 1925?

"Marceline Bautista, the first Filipino principal, who renamed the four Manila High Schools"
 * How can the principal of one high school have the authority to rename all four Manila public high schools?

"the first Associate Justice of the Supreme Court of the Philippines"
 * If the Supreme Court of the Philippines has eight Associate Justices, how can somebody be the first?

Curriculum
Readers would probably like to see a section that describes the Enriched Science Classes.

What is "Kaisha Caravan"?


 * The best description I found: The Japan Foundation, Manila wrote a new note: KAISHA CARAVAN.


 * Please also note External links/Perennial websites

--LukasMatt (talk) 09:07, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

Extracurricular activities
"Kapisanan ng Diwang Filipino"
 * Please explain for readers

"each club or organization serves as a certain subject area's Office for Student Affairs"
 * A little unclear. Would help to follow it with an example—"each club or organization serves as a certain subject area's Office for Student Affairs.  For example,...."

"They initiate activities such as student-led projects."
 * Again, a concrete example would help

Other possible sections #1
Following the "Extracurricular activities" section, you could add any of the these sections (in the order specified):


 * "Awards and recognition"
 * "Notable alumni" (for an example, see Manila Science High School)
 * Notable teachers/staff

[For guidance, see WikiProject Schools/Article guidelines]

Former principals

 * "January 2000" is an error, right? It should be "January 2001".  If it's not an error, then it should be explained with a footnote to the table.

At some time in the future, the list of "Former principals" should be split into a separate article (such as "List of principals at Florentino Torres High School").

Other possible sections #2
Following the "Former principals" section, you could add any of these sections (in the order specified):


 * "See also"
 * "References"
 * At the top of the article, a Wiki Guild of Copy Editors coordinator added the "This article does not cite any references or sources" error template. Every Wikipedia article must include citations from verifiable, reliable sources.  [For guidance, see WikiProject Schools/Article guidelines, specifically the section "References".]


 * Once the article includes citations, then it also must have a "References" section.


 * "External links"

The Torres March
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