Talk:Fluoride battery

History section
Hi, in the "History" is there any reference to be applied to your sentence " When employed in a galvanic cell as a solid-state electrolyte this material allow reaching open-circuit voltage close to theoretical ones, but failed to sustain a current when a load was applied. " ? 94MC94 (talk) 14:21, 7 July 2023 (UTC)


 * Yes, is the ref 4 about KF doped β-PbF2 by Kennedy and Miles Fed97 (talk) 14:48, 7 July 2023 (UTC)

Observations and suggestions for improvements
The following observations and suggestions for improvements were collected, following an expert review of the article within the Science, Technology, Society and Wikipedia course at the Politecnico di Milano, in July 2023. - Some typos are present in the text - "Fluoride ion battery" as a title could be more precise - Conductivity values for all cited electrolytes could be useful to the reader

--Aandurro (talk) 8:00, 25 September 2023 (UTC)