Talk:Folie à Deux (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 02:17, 14 August 2012 (UTC)

I'll take this one for review. Let's read some X-Files. TBrandley 02:17, 14 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Lede: Link science fiction
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Lede: The episode originally aired in the United States on May 10, 1998 on the Fox network → The episode originally aired on the Fox network on May 10, 1998
 * I rearranged this, but left the part about the United States. You've suggested I add that before, and I don't want to have to go through the other articles, since removing it wouldn't match.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Lede: Quotes shouldn't be inside the monster-of-week link, but outside of it
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Lede: in its initial broadcast → upon its initial broadcast
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Lede: It received largely positive reviews from critics, with many commenting upon its creepiness. → It received largely positive reviews, with many critics commenting upon the installment's creepiness.
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Plot: "Dana Scully" is?
 * Done. Add that she's his partner.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Plot: As per MOS:ACRO, please write out SWAT fully on the first mention, then write (SWAT)
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Production: Unlink Folie à deux; it's already linked above in "Plot"
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Production: "In fact," is not needed.
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Production: "North Vancouver, British Columbia" should be two separate links
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Reception: → Broadcast and reception. To match with other ep. articles
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Reception: premiered → originally aired
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Reception: "Folie à Deux" premiered on the Fox network on May 10, 1998. The episode later debuted in the United Kingdom on BBC One on March 10, 1999 → "Folie à Deux" premiered on the Fox network on May 10, 1998, and was first broadcast in the United Kingdom on BBC One on March 10, 1999
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Reception: "Todd VanDerWerff" of who? Surely his writing for someone, The A.V. Club?
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * References: Ref. 13: pp should just be p, like the others
 * Since it covers more than one page, the correct format is to write "pp".-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * External links: on → at
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * External links: Categories should be sorted in alphebitcal order below please.
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

Overall; like all others, a great article. In good shape, once the issues are fixed, I will be happy to pass. Cheers, TBrandley 16:59, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * I've addressed all the issues. Thank you for reviewing.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Looks good. I'll pass the article. TBrandley 02:03, 20 August 2012 (UTC)