Talk:Food security in the Central Valley, California

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Would the following sources be sufficient for the topic covering Central Valley Insecurity and the importance of School Lunches?

Bibliography: A Growing Movement: A Decade of Farm to School in California. N.p.: Center for Food & Justice The Urban & Environmental Policy Institute, n.d. Print. Vallianatos, Mark, Robert Gottlieb, and Margaret A. Haase. "Farm-to-School: Strategies for Urban Health, Combating Sprawl, and Establishing a Community Food Systems Approach." Journal of Planning Education and Research 23.4 (2004): 414-23. Web. Danenberg, Anne, Christopher Jepsen, and Pedro Cerdán. "Student and School Indicators for Youth in California’s Central Valley." (n.d.): n. pag. PUBLIC POLICY INSTITUTE OF CALIFORNIA. Web. H.tennis (talk) 06:15, 25 February 2017 (UTC)

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This is a great start. I think the subsections need to be extended and more fleshed out with detail related to food insecurity in the Central Valley. I would also try to link to other wikipedia articles about food deserts and insecurity- and of other groups in the class working on similar topics. I would also try to find a way to summarize the demographics information that is listed at the top and to emphasize the relevance and elaborate on the context of demographics in the Central Valley more generally. For example, how is this relevant in terms of what you've learned about environmental justice? LJwikiname (talk) 16:02, 6 April 2017 (UTC)

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For whoever is doing the Ag and Farmworkers section: if you've already thought about this, then go ahead and ignore my comment, but in case you hadn't, your section would be a great place to elaborate on timeliness/Trumpness in terms of EJ analysis because you can incorporate info on farm workers/immigrants/policy regarding those things since this is our main linkage to relevance/Trumpness. --Bumblebee024 (talk) 23:23, 10 April 2017 (UTC)