Talk:For My Woman/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:21, 7 May 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

(Criteria marked are unassessed)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
 * b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a. (reference section):
 * b. (citations to reliable sources):
 * c. (OR):
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * Pass/fail:

I will get on with this right away! --K. Peake 07:21, 7 May 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Pipe 2UW Theatre to KIIS 106.5 in the infobox
 * Remove Australian rock since that is not actually sourced as a genre
 * Wikilink Stevie Wright to himself
 * Remove overly obvious wikilink on Sydney
 * The following being in clubs is not sourced
 * "who liked the band enough to sign them to" → "who liked then enough to sign with"
 * Pipe 2UW to KIIS 106.5
 * "Musically "For My Woman", boasts clear influences from" → "Musically "For My Woman" is centered in" since this is the actual genre
 * "on 18 March 1965 backed by" → "on 18 March 1965, backed by"
 * Could you mention what retrospective critics praised about the song?

Background and composition

 * Split into a Background and recording section and a Composition one rather than altogether, as they are both two paras
 * Pipe 2UW to KIIS 106.5 on the img text
 * "Sydney, Australia in 1964 by" → "Sydney, Australia in 1964, by"
 * "they were never particularly influenced" → "the Easybeats were never particularly influenced"
 * "an acquaintance of Vaughan." → "an acquaintance of his."
 * Add a comma after Albert Productions
 * "something the band were" → "something they were"
 * Pipe 2UW to KIIS 106.5
 * ""The Bells", "For My Woman" along with" → ""The Bells" and "For My Woman", along with"
 * Add the release year of "I (Who Have Nothing)"
 * "the group performed on" → "the Easybeats performed on"
 * "contributing with lyrics while" → "contributing lyrics while"
 * "pop trio Bee Gees." → "pop trio the Bee Gees."
 * Pipe merseybeat to Beat music
 * "from Pretty Thing's lead singer" → "from their lead singer"

Release and reception

 * "his top-ten hit" → "his top-10 hit" per MOS:NUM
 * "as the group's first single." → "as their first single."
 * Remove wikilink on rhythm and blues
 * "was reluctant to market it." → "was reluctant on marketing."
 * Quote box looks good!
 * "after their follow-up single" → "after the follow-up single"
 * "a top-ten hit in" → "a top-10 hit in"
 * "It fared particularly well" → "The song fared particularly well"
 * ""Say That You're Mine" were excluded" → ""Say That You're Mine", was excluded"
 * "one of the group's singles" → "one of their singles"
 * "on that album." → "on the album."
 * "was a "mid-paced" blues song" → "is a "mid-paced" blues song" with the wikilink
 * "states that the song is" → "stated that the song is"
 * "that it is a "Taut," → "that it is a "taut,"

Charts

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; that went very quickly! --K. Peake 08:46, 7 May 2023 (UTC)
 * @Kyle Peake! It's a rather short article, meaning I should've fixed all of the points listed here. VirreFriberg (talk) 18:31, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, it was mostly fixed and I did some brief copy editing in any areas where there seemed to be slight misunderstandings! --K. Peake 09:43, 9 May 2023 (UTC)