Talk:Forbidden Fruit (J. Cole song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: DepressedPer (talk · contribs) 02:20, 18 August 2014 (UTC)

I'll be taking the position of reviewing this article. DepressedPer (talk) 02:20, 18 August 2014 (UTC)

Comments from non-reviewer: Lead seems rather short, and I see a couple of bare URL's. Those are not good signs.  Snuggums ( talk  /  edits ) 05:21, 19 August 2014 (UTC)
 * The article is not that long, the lead is proportional to the article length as it should be. I expanded it now anyways. Took me a couple seconds to get the refs too. Judging by the review, looks like those signs were wrong. STATic message me!   15:49, 19 August 2014 (UTC)

Here's what I found in the article:
 * Expand the lead with mention of the song it samples and the mixed reviews it got.
 * ✅ Before I even started reading this, we had the same idea on what to expand the lead with. STATic message me!  
 * WP:OVERCITE in the Background section for Refs. 1 and 4.
 * ✅ STATic message me!   15:49, 19 August 2014 (UTC)
 * Pictures of J. Cole and Kendrick Lamar would help boost the article.
 * Not enough room for both without squishing the text, but I did add one. STATic  message me!   15:49, 19 August 2014 (UTC)
 * Ref. #4: Complex's publisher is Complex Media.
 * Refs. #5 and #6 need citations.
 * Ref. #8: Exclaim!'s publisher is Ian Danzig.
 * Ref. #9: Now's publisher is Now Communications.
 * Ref. #10: AllMusic's publisher is All Media Network.
 * Ref. #11: Los Angeles Times publisher is Tribune Company.
 * Ref. #12: Spin's publisher is Spin Media.
 * Everything else is ✅. STATic message me!   15:49, 19 August 2014 (UTC)

Other than that, Its well-written and mentions info in the right places. It's great that your putting work into Hip hop articles. DepressedPer (talk) 05:48, 19 August 2014 (UTC)


 * Thank you, I also appreciate your work in hip hop articles, there definitely is not enough of us. STATic message me!   15:49, 19 August 2014 (UTC)


 * Everything looks good to pass it as a GA. Congratulations! DepressedPer (talk) 20:53, 19 August 2014 (UTC)