Talk:Force Shaping

suggestions for clean-up/improvement
Plenty of good information here, but the article needs the following clean-up:
 * Convert to a more neutral point of view, appropriate to an encyclopedia.
 * Convert from a current events format to a historical format. (Give years, etc.)
 * Add citations/references where appropriate. The use of citations and the attribution of opinions to these sources may allow the original author to retain more of the discussion of how these CGOs are being harmed, without causing NPOV problems.  (Can you cite a source for the phrase "save money and hurt people"?)

I also think the article could be strengthened by the inclusion of some more statistics (firings planned and $ saved), if they're available.

- Csari 04:36, 6 February 2006 (UTC)