Talk:Forever (Mariah Carey song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 20:14, 12 December 2010 (UTC)

Lead

 * "however, he will continue living in her memory, forever" - remove commas
 * ""Forever" was a song Carey wrote alongside Walter Afanasieff in early 1995" → "Forever" was written by Carey and Walter Afanasieff in early 1995

Composition

 * "The song is set in the time signature common time" - it isn't in common time according to
 * "in the key of A ♭ major" - no space between 'A' and '♭'
 * Link chord progression
 * The chord progression is A♭-C/G-Fm/E♭-D♭-E♭
 * Why don't you include the vocal range? (E♭3 to F♯5)
 * You need a source straight after the quote sentence

Reception

 * ""Forever" was released as an airplay only single in the US, and received a limited European release." - source?

Music video and live performances

 * ""Forever" was performed throughout all the shows on Carey's Daydream World Tour in 1996" - source?

Summary
Good job Nathan, ping me when you're done Adabow (talk · contribs) 20:14, 12 December 2010 (UTC)
 * Nice work, passed. Adabow (talk · contribs) 21:45, 12 December 2010 (UTC)