Talk:Forever Young (Blackpink song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Skyshifter (talk · contribs) 15:22, 24 March 2024 (UTC)

As promised! Skyshifter  talk  15:22, 24 March 2024 (UTC)

Comments

 * No copyvio
 * The only image used has a valid license
 * Infobox says the length is 3:59 but the article says three minutes and fifty-seven seconds; fix the inconsistency
 * Since I am not an editor of the area I can't know for sure, but are sources like SBS PopAsia or Tone Glow reliable? At first glance, they seem pretty blog-like.
 * Per its website, it is/was a music publication founded by a Pitchfork writer Joshua Minsoo Kim so I feel that they are not just a blog and have some valuable critiques. Rmved SBS PopAsia as there is another source with the same content.


 * Link moombahton
 * → — for formality
 * The Critical reception section uses too many quotes. Can you paraphrase some of them?
 * — add the name of Chase McMullen here
 * — on → in is more appropriate
 * — missing "on" between YGEX and November
 * → "writing that" seems more appropriate
 * → — per MOS:QWQ (resulting in )
 * 3rd → third per MOS:ORDINAL
 * I don't know about Korean awards, but it reads as if the song was nominated for "Artist of the Year". Could you clarify that?
 * That's just the official name of the award, they give 12 "Artist of the Year" awards for the best song of each month of the year.


 * could add inline citation, like the other charts
 * — Seems irrelevant to the article and "made history" doesn't seem neutral. Would remove

Spot-check
Spot-check to follow, soon. Skyshifter  talk  22:45, 25 March 2024 (UTC)

Numbers based on this version
 * 5 — clear close-paraphrasing issue;  and  — words are the same from the source and there aren't quotation marks in the article. Could you paraphrase it further?
 * Also, seemed confusing at first glance. I had to look at the song to see that this is a line from the lyrics. You should clearly state that "Blackpink is the revolution" is a line from the lyrics here. Ref 6 from The 405 can be used with it.
 * 6 — I don't see the confirmation for
 * The source wrote "the best bop here"


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 * 30 —  Apparently, it is inaccurate to say that they "reprised" the song on the 15th. They performed the song on the 12th but it only aired on the 15th, so it wasn't a reprise.

Skyshifter  talk  00:47, 28 March 2024 (UTC)


 * Done with all, please let me know if I missed anything. ɴᴋᴏɴ21  ❯❯❯  talk  15:51, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
 * ✅! Skyshifter   talk  16:03, 28 March 2024 (UTC)