Talk:Fork-tailed drongo

FYI, for future GA reviewer...
...pratically all paragraphs were rephrased. Earwig's Copyvio Detector points to 0%, thank you!  The Blue  Rider   20:46, 6 March 2024 (UTC)


 * Good. One problem now is that you changed the meaning of many sentences. For example, you changed "born without feathers" to "When young, they lack feathers", which is not precise (young birds of course have feathers, except directly after hatching"). You changed "being the last heard at dusk" to "heard until dusk", but this implies that they stop when dusk arrives, which is not the case – many birds are very vocal during dusk. You change "Adolescent birds are dark brown" to "During adolescence, their appearance transitions to", implying that the changes take place when they already reached adulthood, which is not the case. You change "robust" to "sturdy", but in zoology, "robust" means "strongly built" or simply "thick", while "sturdy" has a completely different meaning. These cases did immediately catch my eye, but there might be more. Jens Lallensack (talk) 22:53, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Ok...fixed.  The Blue  Rider  Postal horn icon.svg 22:58, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
 * You are too fast. Writing a good article takes some time and patience. You just reverted to the old version, which was not ideal either (because of the paraphrasing, but there are other issues). Birds are not "born", they "hatch". "Adolescence fork-tailed drongos" should be "Adult fork-tailed drongos". "And being the last heard at dusk" has the paraphrasing problem again; you could write something like "are amongst the last birds to sing during the evening". Jens Lallensack (talk) 23:04, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
 * I didn't just revert to the old version. I've worked on this article for months so I don't understand your comment... Birds can be born...it's not adult fork-tailed drongos its reffering to juveniles...not many ways to rephrase, nevertheless, I tried to change one word or too.  The Blue  Rider  Postal horn icon.svg 23:16, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
 * My apologies. Yes, you can say "born", though it is more unusual. Jens Lallensack (talk) 00:44, 7 March 2024 (UTC)