Talk:Former Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre Championships/GA1

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:24, 12 May 2020 (UTC)

Am happy to review this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 20:24, 12 May 2020 (UTC)
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Lead

 * "It was founded in 1933 and is the oldest, still active promotion in the world." - the word "still" is redundant in this sentence
 * "a total of nine CMLL championships have either been abandoned or control of the championship was given to another promotion." - title
 * "On occasion, the promotion declares a championship vacant, which means there is no champion at that point in time." - repetition of "champion"
 * "CMLL, as most lucha libre promotions," - Like most lucha libre promotions, CMLL
 * "or real-life issues like a champion suffering an injury being unable to defend the championship" - such as a championship suffering an injury and being unable to defend the title,
 * The extra space after the second paragraph is not needed

Mexican National Middleweight Championship (1933–1993)

 * "for wrestlers weighing between 87 kg (192 lb) to 97 kg (214 lb)," - and
 * "Blue Panther winning the championship July 27, 1992," - championship on July 27
 * "One of these wrestlers was the then reigning National Middleweight Champion
 * "CMLL created the CMLL World Middleweight Championship the main focus of the division." - as the main

NWA World Middleweight Championship (1939–2010)

 * "EMLL retained control of the championship and continued to use the NWA moniker even after 1986." - the word "even" is unneeded
 * "In 2010 CMLL gave up control of the championship" - relinquished

NWA World Welterweight Championship (1946–2010)

 * "for wrestlers weighing between 77 kg (170 lb) to 87 kg (192 lb)," - and
 * "The company would continue promoting the championship until 1996 when it was brought to Japan to be one of eight championships" - repetition of "championship(s)"
 * "used by the Toryumon." - just Toryumon will do

NWA World Light Heavyweight Championship (1958–2010)

 * "The first Mexican based champion" - Mexican-based
 * "EMLL/CMLL had 52 separate reigns, split out between 38 wrestlers in total." - divided between a total of 38 wrestlers.

NWA Intercontinental Heavyweight Championship (1990)

 * "Pirata Morgan won the championship no later than October 1990, records are unclear if Morgan won a tournament or was awarded the championship." - the comma should be replaced by a semi-colon

CMLL Japan Women's Championship (1999–2001)

 * "La Diabólica's reign lasted only a matter of weeks" - how many weeks exactly?
 * "The CMLL Japan Women's Championship was actively defended in Japan even after CMLL stopped touring." - the word "even" is unneeded
 * "Shiratori's last documented championship defense took place on January 7, 2001, where she defeated Policewoman to retain the championship." - repetition of "championship"

CMLL Japan Super Lightweight Championship (1999–2000)

 * "on a show in Nagoya Japan." - a comma is missing between "Nagoya" and "Japan"
 * "Virus and Ricky Marvin both won the championship twice each." - the word "each" is redundant here
 * "When the weight division was adjusted to become the CMLL World Lightweight Championship, but still used the original belt." - the promotion retained the original belt.

CMLL Japan Tag Team Championship (1999–2000)

 * "Mexican wrestler El Oriental and Japanese wrestler Tsubasa defeated Último Guerrero" - try to reword this sentence to avoid the use of "wrestler"

LLA Azteca Championship (2009–2014)

 * "as the main attraction of both the shows and the TV broadcasts on TV Azteca." - both the shows and TV broadcasts
 * "Over the following five years the LLA Azteca Championship changed hands seven times," - there were seven LLA Azteca champions,