Talk:Formidabile-class ironclad/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 10:10, 19 August 2016 (UTC)


 * Grabbing for a review later. Miyagawa (talk) 10:10, 19 August 2016 (UTC)

That's all I've got. Once you taken a look, ping me back and I'll come back and promote. Miyagawa (talk) 13:17, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Lead: You give Regina Marina in Italian, but then Sardinian Navy in English. I would have thought Regia Marina Sarda (Sardinian Royal Navy) would have been more appropriate.
 * Good point
 * I'd throw in a piped link where you say "unified" to Italian unification
 * Good idea
 * I'd change the "both" in "until both were withdrawn from service for use as training ships" to "they", simply to reduce the repetition of the word in over those few sentences in the lead.
 * Done
 * General characteristics: Link Mast (sailing)
 * Added.
 * - thanks for another review, I think I've fixed everything. Parsecboy (talk) 12:08, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Great, happy to promote. Miyagawa (talk) 16:23, 22 August 2016 (UTC)