Talk:Forrest M. Holly Jr.

Suggestions to get this accepted?
I would appreciate any suggestions on what is lacking from this draft article that if added or changed will get it published. In Feb. of this year editor DGG noted that the subject was certainly notable enough, but that the page need re-writing. I've edited a bit since then, but there is nothing obvious to me. Advice appreciated. Fogden (talk) 01:19, 25 February 2020 (UTC)