Talk:Fortifications of Xi'an/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:45, 5 June 2016 (UTC)

Will review this soon. Cheers, Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 06:45, 5 June 2016 (UTC)

Here are my comments: Sainsf  (talk ·''' contribs) 17:04, 5 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. Busy today. Will address the issues tomorrow.-- Nvvchar . 07:25, 6 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * Mention the language of the translation in the infobox
 * Done
 * (i.e., Zhu Yuanzhang) What does "that is" mean here? Is it the name of the Emperor? If it is the Chinese term for this, then I don't find it necessary enough to be included.
 * Zhu Yuanzhang is the name of the Emperor
 * History
 * Ming dynasty (1368–1644) Mentioned twice
 * Removed the period
 *  the wall was attacked with bombs by enemy forces Who were the enemies?
 * changed to "revolutionary forces"
 * Features
 * which takes four hours of walking to traverse → which would typically take four hours to cover
 * Done
 * Anything more on Chinese rampart architecture style? I am clueless about it
 * It is part of Chinese architecture as there is mention of rampart architecture . Hence, changed to Chinese architecture
 *  at 120 metres (390 ft) intervals → at intervals of 120 metres (390 ft)
 * Done
 * wall) and then later cannon balls at the  → wall), and later cannon balls, at the 
 * Done


 * Sources
 * Are refs. 10 and 12 reliable?
 * Ref 10 - Lonely Planet references have been used extensively but not for history and I suppose it is valid.
 * Ref 12 is of the University of Maine at Farmington. I have added the details now.


 * Thanks, I have addressed all issues now. Please see. Glad to address any other issues. Nvvchar . 12:56, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Good. Now we can promote this. Cheers, Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 13:46, 7 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks, . Nvvchar . 01:01, 8 June 2016 (UTC)