Talk:Fossil fuel divestment/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: CorporateM (talk · contribs) 04:47, 11 August 2015 (UTC)

I don't feel this article is ready for a GA nomination at this time. A few things I noticed included:
 * A lot of sections with only one or two sentences, with only one sub-section, or that otherwise don't seem very sensible
 * Numerous indiscriminate lists that in at least some cases using poor-quality sources. (just an external link to the full list might work better)
 * A lot of off-topic information about tangential topics
 * Severe spacing issues
 * Severe gramming issues, such as lowercase letters where uppercase ones should be, extra commas, missing periods

Overall the page gives me the impression of being about the groups that have supported divestment, rather than about divestment specifically, its history, the debate about it, whether it's been successful, etc. CorporateM (Talk) 04:47, 11 August 2015 (UTC)