Talk:Four Seasons Mall/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wilhelmina Will (talk · contribs) 11:15, 10 April 2016 (UTC)

GA criteria
: With the issues in the below comments section satisfactorily addressed, the article now fully complies with MOS policies on grammar, along with structure/layout in general. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 07:29, 11 April 2016 (UTC)
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: The article adheres to a good number of reputable sources. No evident incorporation of original research. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 14:55, 10 April 2016 (UTC)
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: The article seems to cover all encyclopedically relevant aspects of its topic, with no excessive detail included anywhere. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 14:54, 10 April 2016 (UTC)
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. The article's tone remains neutral throughout. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 14:52, 10 April 2016 (UTC) . Since the article's creation last month, it has not been subject to edit warring or any form of disruptive interactive editing. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 14:41, 10 April 2016 (UTC) : Having made note of the information present on the file page, the sole image used in this article abides by fair use rules, and also serves a relevant illustrative purpose. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 14:40, 10 April 2016 (UTC)
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Comments

 * In the second paragraph of the introduction, there's a little too much "the mall". Seeing as the sentences beginning with "Although the mall currently still stands..." and "Despite the mall's closure..." each use the phrase "the mall" later on, it should suffice in these instances to substitute with "it/'s". Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 15:00, 10 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Also, in the latter sentence it might be better to reword "Despite the mall's closure, periodically, several events take place at the mall..." so that "periodically" follows "several events", so as to reduce comma usage and improve word flow. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 15:03, 10 April 2016 (UTC)
 * I don't know if you are done with the review or not, but I finished changing the article per your suggestions. Thank you. Carbrera (talk) 22:29, 10 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you! Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 07:28, 11 April 2016 (UTC)

The article qualifies as GA. Congratulations! Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 07:30, 11 April 2016 (UTC)