Talk:François-Joseph-Victor Broussais

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Peer feedback
Hi, I'm from 140.106. First off, I wanted to say good job on expanding an article that was basically a stub before. I think this could be improved further though. Possibly split up the Life section into Early Life/Education and Later Career? I also think the Works section could be more detailed as to what specifically Broussais did in those studies. Lastly, the sentence structure could be more varied. Again, good job! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dsun15 (talk • contribs) 04:18, 17 March 2017 (UTC)

Good job on the article! I agree that the life section could be improved especially by changing the heading from Life to let's say, Medical Training/Background. I would also say for that section to remember to not just refer to him as he in every sentence; adding his last name keeps people's attention and makes it easier to follow. Zerimare10 (talk) 13:23, 17 March 2017 (UTC) Zerimare10