Talk:Françoise de Dreux

A little Choppy and Very Specific
This article is fairly well written, but it comes across as choppy and abuses the semicolon. The person and references seem valid, although I have not fully read through them as the source does not give specific pages. The content of the article also seems highly specific. If the majority of information that is known about this person is through the Poison Affair, I would highly suggest creating a separate section in the article titled "Poison Affair" Above this section, (in the beginning of the article) I would put more basic information about this person. Place of birth, birth date (if known), etc. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Taloskhaos (talk • contribs) 01:32, 18 January 2012 (UTC)