Talk:Franc affair/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:18, 21 April 2021 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:18, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
 * No DABs, external links OK
 * Images appropriately licensed
 * More later.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:44, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Tell the reader that Ludendorff was a former general in the Prussian Army.


 * Move that to the lede.


 * partition Austria-Hungary of


 * French prime minister Georges Clemenceau in particular awkward. Suggest "in particular, French prime..."


 * in favor of Kingdom of Romania, the Kingdom of Serbs, Croats and Slovenes, First Czechoslovak Republic "the Kingdom" "and the"

I am ashamed to admit that you are right. It should be a tad better now.--Catlemur (talk) 19:16, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
 * You have a real problem in this article with forgetting to use articles like "the", "of", etc. Please do a thorough re-read and add all these sorts of missing words. Ping me when you're done and I'll continue the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:17, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Hungarian society experienced a rise in the popularity of nationalism and revanchism Briefly explain why this happened in the lede


 * Link franc in the lede


 * Capitalize Admiral


 * Post-war Hungary experienced diplomatic isolation and economic hardship reads awkwardly to me, perhaps: "... suffered economic hardship and was isolated diplomatically"?


 * convert 93,000km


 * Hyphenate long established, French occupied, left over, oath swearing, brother in law,


 * spell out dollars


 * however they forgot "but" --Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:57, 30 April 2021 (UTC)

All done.--Catlemur (talk) 16:45, 1 May 2021 (UTC)