Talk:Frank B. Walsh

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I can add more information on Frank Walsh's life, specifically his medical accomplishments. He published many articles, and I can go over the discoveries that he made over the course of his life.

Future sources:

http://www.ascrs.org/honorees/frank-b-walsh-md

http://www.medicalarchives.jhmi.edu/papers/walsh_fb.html

https://professorships.jhu.edu/professorship/frank-b-walsh-professorship-neuro-ophthalmology/

http://novel.utah.edu/Walsh/career.php

https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/8113442

Glaser, Joel S. Neuro-ophthalmology : In Memory of Dr. Frank B. Walsh. St. Louis: C. V. Mosby, 1980. Hewilliam7 (talk) 19:45, 28 February 2017 (UTC)

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Hewilliam7 (talk • contribs) 19:36, 28 February 2017 (UTC)

I hope to expand more information on his personal life and his work life. Within theses categories, I'd like to discuss what schools he went to and how he got to be a neuro -ophthalmologist. I'd like to also look into his roles in contributing to make Johns Hopkins like it is. In getting to his work life, I would like investigate his procedures and approaches, along with his successes and failures. The sources are the same above, which comes from my partner, Will He. Pajberman (talk) 01:56, 3 March 2017 (UTC)

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Could edit
Article could be divided into distinct, clear sections: Early Education, Personal Life, Medical Career, Accomplishments, etc. Pictures would be nice so that readers could have a visual image of who Frank B. Walsh is. Additionally, pictures of the different organizations such as the Winnipeg General Hospital would be good. There should be some information about his origins, family life, and early education. The article jumps right into his adulthood career which doesn't give much information about Walsh. Additionally, every sentence is a new fact, and so there should be sentences that elaborate on the facts given about Walsh. There are good facts just not enough information about them. Additionally, this article focuses a lot on his literary accomplishments rather than medical. Csong22 (talk) 16:03, 17 March 2017 (UTC)

Review
While this article does underscore some important aspects of Frank B. Walsh's career such as being appointed professor at the Wilmer institute and acknowledging the recognition he received on his research regarding birth control, I believe that overall this article should do a better job in organizing the information. I recommend that the article be put into different sections such as earl life, Career specifically time at Hopkins, and even another section titled honors and rewards that he received. By organizing the article in this fashion readers will find it easier to get an overall idea about Frank B. Walsh and even look for specific information if they wanted too. Apart from organizing the article, I believe that more information could be added, not necessarily in Childhood but at his time at Hopkins and the impact he made in not only the field of Ophthalmology but all of medicine. Jdesai3 (talk) 01:12, 10 April 2017 (UTC)