Talk:Frank Big Bear

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 6 January 2020 and 13 March 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Bella U.A.. Peer reviewers: Iaguayo.

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I am going to start off by saying many of the things that I liked about your work. First, and most obvious, I loved the way your wiki page was set up. You made sure to include all of the elements that were assigned to us and organized them very nicely! I also enjoyed the way you told Frank Big Bear's story from his origins to when he became famous, you sounded concise, credible, and confident. You can already tell you put in a lot of effort and time into your page at first glance, but that is only guaranteed once reading how well written it is. Lastly, I really enjoyed the way you included so many citations, not only from websites or articles online. (I think you even cited a youtube video?) It made me as the reader trust that your work was credible and something that I could rely on if I was a middle school student doing a research paper on Frank Big Bear. For the most part, I do believe your wiki page is very near, if not already, to being finished. The only small suggestion I have is: after looking at the paintings that you choose to focus on, your descriptions can be expanded just a bit. Some advice I could give you is to try and describe it like if you were describing it to someone who was unable to see. Try to capture with your words the colors, the beauty, and try to capture that one thing that makes it special. Other than that, I think you have done a fantastic job! And I know you'll just make it even better for final grading.

Iaguayo (talk) 01:47, 25 February 2020 (UTC)iaguayo