Talk:Frank E. Beach Memorial Fountain/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kingsif (talk · contribs) 18:55, 12 May 2020 (UTC)

Hi, I just saw this added and am planning on reviewing it (nice, interesting) - but it just got nommed so I feel a responsibility to go do a few older noms first. Should only be a few days, if that's alright? Kingsif (talk) 18:55, 12 May 2020 (UTC)
 * , No problem! I've also requested a copy edit from the Guild of Copy Editors so waiting a few days is no problem. I think the prose should be fine overall, but I always request GOCE reviews after article expansions. Thanks! --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 22:23, 12 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Infobox and images good
 * Reliable sources
 * The Oregonian is a good source, not available but AGF
 * Inline cites used well
 * Perhaps move ref [3] (current) to the paragraph rather than the inscription quote? To show that it supports the preceding sentences, too
 * Lead good length
 * good summary
 * Minor typo at press conference → "at a press conference"?
 * Should concrete aggregates not be singular?
 * Rest looks good; well structured, neutral
 * Talk and history clear - article stable
 * Copyvio check clear

Overall

 * on hold Only a few issues - short but sweet. Kingsif (talk) 21:18, 15 May 2020 (UTC)
 * , Thanks so much! I've made these changes. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 03:46, 16 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Great, I trust your work that the coverage is not lacking, the sources also don't suggest there's anything substantial missing. Symbol support vote.svg Kingsif (talk) 04:11, 16 May 2020 (UTC)
 * , Thanks! I checked the Oregonian archives thoroughly. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 04:18, 16 May 2020 (UTC)