Talk:Frank Jonet/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:48, 1 March 2024 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:48, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Link treasurer, accountant, fire and police commission, office manager, board of directors, non-profit, State Teacher's College
 * a heart condition Don't use euphemisms like this
 * introducing good business practices for the management of professional football Either enclose it in quotation marks or reword it--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:11, 12 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Unless I am missing an article, there is no natural link for a combined fire and police commission. Otherwise all other comments were addressed . Thanks for the review. « Gonzo fan2007  (talk)  @ 16:29, 12 March 2024 (UTC)