Talk:Frank Tarr/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 23:14, 14 July 2015 (UTC)


 * No DABs, external links OK
 * Images acceptably licensed.
 * You're using a lot of UK-specific terms that are not immediately obvious to non-Commonwealth English speakers. So a lot of links are going to be needed.
 * Added a ton! FunkyCanute (talk) 10:29, 15 July 2015 (UTC)


 * Is there a link for international rugby union? It's And are there articles on the rugby positions like centre and three-quarters? If so, link them.
 * Yes, for positions; also rugby union but not specifically 'international'. Done. FunkyCanute (talk) 10:29, 15 July 2015 (UTC)


 * Move links to first usage (like Oxford).
 * Done. FunkyCanute (talk) 10:29, 15 July 2015 (UTC)


 * Link tries, caps, reading law, solicitor, Captain of Games, rugby XV, 'A' team, fresher, articled
 * Fixed: changed XV to team; Captain of Games doesn't have an article; neither does A team; all others done. FunkyCanute (talk) 10:29, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
 * So I guess that an 'A' team is not the highest level of competition? That would be the senior team, right?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:38, 15 July 2015 (UTC)


 * Owston Dickinson Simpson and Bigg Don't know about law firm names, but normally there would be commas separating the individual names.
 * Fixed. FunkyCanute (talk) 10:29, 15 July 2015 (UTC)


 * Need place of publication for McCrery.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:14, 14 July 2015 (UTC)
 * Fixed. FunkyCanute (talk) 10:29, 15 July 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the review,. Please let me know if I need to fix anything else. FunkyCanute (talk) 10:29, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
 * Only need a link for Lincolnshire regiment.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:38, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
 * Done! FunkyCanute (talk) 17:11, 15 July 2015 (UTC)