Talk:Franz Augsberger

Unencyclopedic detail
Probably an expert should do the trimming, but there's way too much of a blow-by-blow service record here. Some paragraphs could be summarized in as little as one sentence. Highlight the important stuff, don't bury it in a mass of information. --Dhartung | Talk 21:33, 31 July 2007 (UTC)
 * The reason for this is that it is a literal translation from this source . Ekki01 15:39, 26 August 2007 (UTC)