Talk:Franz Choque/GA1

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Reviewer: An anonymous username, not my real name (talk · contribs) 21:05, 13 November 2022 (UTC)

I will look into this. An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 21:05, 13 November 2022 (UTC)


 * The term "Oruro prefecture" is used, but the word "district" would be better, as that is its official name.
 * 'Prefecture' here refers not to an administrative division but to an institution. Bolivia's nine departments were headed by a prefect until 2010, so 'Oruro Prefecture' would be equivalent to 'Oruro Governor's Office' today. I have capitalized it now, though. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 21:50, 13 November 2022 (UTC)


 * Of Aymara descent, Franz Choque was born on 26 August 1969 in Inquisivi, a rural locale situated in La Paz's tropical Yungas region. Perhaps say "Franz Choque was born on 26 August 1969 in Inquisivi to a family of Aymara descent...".
 * Reworded accordingly though not exactly. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 21:50, 13 November 2022 (UTC)


 * He has four brothers, according to one of the sources, who you could mention.
 * Perhaps if they were more individually notable or at least had names or stated professions. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 21:50, 13 November 2022 (UTC)


 * If you don't want a redlink in your article I completely understand, but you could add one for "University of Aquinas". Again, you don't have to.
 * My typical barometer for whether to insert a red link depends on whether there's at least a Spanish equivalent article. 21:50, 13 November 2022 (UTC)


 * The term "Orureño" might confuse readers, since it's only used once.
 * Changed to just Oruro. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 21:50, 13 November 2022 (UTC)


 * the Supreme Electoral Tribunal opted to take into account UD's victory in Oruro's special ingenious circumscription in its calculations Did you mean "indigenous"?
 * Dang autocorrect. Good catch! 21:50, 13 November 2022 (UTC)


 * as though it was using State resources "State" should probably be lowercase.
 * ✅ Krisgabwoosh (talk) 21:50, 13 November 2022 (UTC)

Good coverage, good image, etc.; the only issues I can find are very minor. I'm putting it on hold. An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 21:32, 13 November 2022 (UTC)

Great job getting to everything so fast. It all looks good now. I will pass it. An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 22:09, 13 November 2022 (UTC)