Talk:Franz Joseph (artist)

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"the only set of blueprints of the original Starship Enterprise" I have to dispute this. The officially licenced Star: The Roleplaying Game published by FASA in the 1980's contained a set of Enterprise blue prints that varied considerably from FJ's. 24.84.120.89 01:34, 3 November 2006 (UTC)

what source material did he use?
This article states that Joseph did not have access to original set design material when he created the Manual, while the Star Trek Star Fleet Technical Manual page states the exact opposite. -   Metalello    talk 19:35, 25 January 2016 (UTC)

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The last full paragraph in the "Career" section
The paragraph seems to be truncated.

There is an incongruity between "... and locations from Star Trek:" and "The drawings inspired ..." that immediately follows.

Is there any way to check a prior version to see what's missing?

Just curious if this can be fixed/remedied. 2600:8800:784:8F00:C23F:D5FF:FEC4:D51D (talk) 08:53, 15 May 2019 (UTC)

"loosely associated"
In the lede, it states that Franz Joseph was "loosely associated" with Star Trek.

"loosely," really ? ? ?

How can it be "loosely" when the only thing the entire article talks about is his connection to the series ! ! !

I think the "loosely" should be taken out.

Thoughts. . . 2600:8800:784:8F00:C23F:D5FF:FEC4:D51D (talk) 08:58, 15 May 2019 (UTC)