Talk:Fraser Barron/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 23:07, 30 January 2020 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:07, 30 January 2020 (UTC)
 * No DABs, external links OK
 * File:Fraser Barron.jpg needs a US-PD tag. PD-1996 should work since it was published before 1946. The other photos are appropriately licensed.
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 07:13, 31 January 2020 (UTC)


 * Link Fairey Gordon, flak
 * Done for Fairey Gordon but flak was already linked. Maybe you missed the first mention? Zawed (talk) 07:13, 31 January 2020 (UTC)
 * Quite probably!--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:33, 31 January 2020 (UTC)


 * Add a hyphen for Lancaster equipped
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 07:13, 31 January 2020 (UTC)


 * Barron's death is unclear but "are" unclear. And add a comma after unclear.
 * Both done. Zawed (talk) 07:13, 31 January 2020 (UTC)


 * Is there an article on Le Mans West Cemetery?
 * No, but I have redlinked it. I may do an article on it in the future. Zawed (talk) 07:13, 31 January 2020 (UTC)


 * Not many people go from Leading Aircraftsman to Wing Commander in less than four years, even in wartime!--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:25, 30 January 2020 (UTC)
 * And to think he was only 23 as well!, thanks for the review. I have dealt with your points as outlined above. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 07:13, 31 January 2020 (UTC)