Talk:Fred Levin

NPOV
This article has a lot of great info. Unfortunately it has some incredibly biased sections, notably in the tobacco section: "The dean of the Senate then secretly got the law passed on the last day of session and at the last minute. The Senator made it part of another law that everyone supported, and Fred’s amendments passed." "Secretly" is not a term that should be casually used to refer to legal/legislative proceedings of any sort, unless the article also exposes such a mode of operations. I also doubt that a single senator can "make" something part of another law without even committee approval, and that "everyone" truly supported the law, etc... basically this is a microcosm of problems throughout the article, which has a very conspiratorial tone. Someone familiar with the topic should fix this, as a casual reader might infer some strange conclusions from these claims. I don't want to just delete the POV parts because it is quite possible that there is an interesting story behind this narrative which could be properly explained, with the right level of confidence. -Dean dfsayers@gmail.com 07:37, 30 September 2017 (UTC)