Talk:Fred Phillis

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This is my first attempt at an article and I gather than in my newbie eagerness I have not met the accepted criteria to "assert the importance or significance of the article's subject." I would welcome some suggestions on how I could improve this aspect of the article (and I suspect in other areas as well). The subject of the article is indeed a noted sports person within his field and I am not sure how better to emphasise that? Should I perhaps summarise his achievements somewhere other than in the template box? Pudgey 04:15, 12 September 2006 (UTC) Never mind - I see someone has removed the tag. Pudgey 04:17, 12 September 2006 (UTC)
 * I would consider retitling this "Fred Phillis" as that's what people knew him as. --Roisterer (talk) 04:25, 3 August 2010 (UTC)