Talk:Fred Shero/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer:  intelati  talk 06:40, 16 November 2010 (UTC)
 * GA review (see here for criteria)

The bolded things need attention.
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * All Good
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * Well referenced, and no synthesis
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * Well written, and easy to understand. even for a hockey n00b
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * yep
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * No edit wars
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * Hmmm... My first two GA nominations have little to no pictures. :/


 * I like pretty pictures, so can you find a team photo or something like that?


 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Just a nitpicky thing, the "Personal life" seems a little small. can you expand on it?
 * I expanded the personal life section, as for the pictures I searched through Flickr and emailed a couple of users one didn't want to change the licensing the other one, who had a picture of the team that looked to be a photo taken by a no-professional (which makes me think they might hold the copy rights), but they have not responded and I doubt they will at this point. I don't know where else to find free images and I think that attempting to add it under fair use would fail Contextual significance. "Non-free content is used only if its presence would significantly increase readers' understanding of the topic, and its omission would be detrimental to that understanding."--Mo Rock...Monstrous (talk) 04:19, 19 November 2010 (UTC)
 * I'll pass this one. -- intelati  talk 17:59, 19 November 2010 (UTC)